Thursday 21 November 2019

1953 Tangiwai railway accident



WALT I am learning how to write about history.
Today I did history about the 1953 Tangiwai railway accident. I had to get as much history about the story what I was writing about. It was challenging because I had to get as much information about it and it was quite hard.

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  1. Anonymous22 November 2019 at 10:02

    hello my name is Georgia from Paroa school
    I really liked how you added in so many different facts and didn't just have a couple of facts and it really helped your slide show by making each slide very cohesive.

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  2. Anonymous22 November 2019 at 10:03

    Hi Taj I am Grace.H from Whenua, This is a really cool slide because it has so much detail about what happened. I also love how the plan layout is because it is now full of detail but it still has detail that dosen't overwhelm you. To be BTB You could add a few more slides for some more information.
    From Grace.H

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  4. Anonymous22 November 2019 at 10:04

    Hey Taj, I found this post really informational and interesting. I didn't know there was a train crash this big. To make this post BTB you could give some more information about the train and maybe get stories from people on board. Ciao, Carter.

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  5. Anonymous22 November 2019 at 10:05

    hi i like the way you added multiple videos and photos next time you could describe what is going on in the pitchers
    by cooper

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  6. Anonymous22 November 2019 at 10:05

    Hi Taj. Harley from Paroa school this is very instresting i never knew about this accident and when i went on here it learnt it you might want to check your spelling though becuase you said "285 passengers and crew on boat" I think you might of needed to spell board

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  7. Anonymous22 November 2019 at 10:06

    Hi tag it is Angus from whenua i like some of thous videos

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  8. Anonymous22 November 2019 at 10:06

    Hi Taj. I never knew about this accident and I learn't quite alot after reading this.

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  9. Anonymous22 November 2019 at 10:07

    Hi Taj
    That is really interesting and I really like it maybe next time you can sped more time on the facts.
    your sincerely Jason

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  10. Anonymous22 November 2019 at 10:07

    Hi Taj thanks for showing me this information about Tangiwai railway accident in 1953 I never knew about that accident.

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