Friday 4 September 2020

max the mighty

Max The Mighty


This story is about a kid that was walking to school. Then he saw a girl and he helps her but there is a guy that stops him. Then he punched him and the girl went off her nut because the man had an old miners helmet. When the kid gave the helmet to the girl she just ran off and did not even say thank you. Then when he got home the girl was at the door and there was a pretty weird thing to do that. And then the guy that he punched was there to and the police. Then he got chaste buy the police and then for the rest on his life he was a bad guy. 


1 comment:

  1. Hi Taj I like your post about Max the Might. Maybe next time you could add more capital letters and full stops. Keep up the good work Taj. Maty your blog buddy from Room 5, Ahipara School.

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