Thursday, 4 March 2021

My persuasive writing to get a climbing wall at our school

 We should have a climbing wall at our school because it would be fun because most of our options at our school are getting boring and it would be fun cool and we would look ford to it. It would help people with weight problems and it would be good for little kids and that is my writing.

Today my class had to do a peas of writing about us trying to per swab my teacher about something and this is what I did. I liked doing it because it was fun to write about something to per swad my teacher.

1 comment:

  1. hi this was good next time dont make it red because it was hard to see good job

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